Monday, September 24, 2007

TaVika, by me

Hi,

just scribbled something... written it in 15 min or so... got some good review comments... and scope for improvement is there too ;o)

so posting it on the blog for keeping it handy :o)

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Jeevithamela untundo, emi jaraga bothondo evariki eruka
jarigindi jarigedi jarugaboyedi antha oka prayogamega
egisi pade alala laaga, dani meedi padava laaga
sagadame mana kartavyam, mana dharmam, mana jeevitha paramaardham.


Chetiloni geethallo, tala raathallo dorukutunda samadhanam
kashta pade manasunte, kalasi raada adrushtam
odi dudukulu edurkontu, gelupOtamulu chavi choostu
sagadame mana kartavyam, mana dharmam, mana jeevitha paramaardham.

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2 comments:

Vee said...

gurujeee.... mee lo dagi unna kavi ippudippude bayatapadtunnadu... aa kavi edagataniki inko chance ichi chudandi :)
nice effort....

Vee said...

gurujee... update link to my blog in ur "BLOGS TO SEE" list. now, its http://psychesvisage.blogspot.com/